A friend of mine posted this on Fetlife recently:
Once again I find myself wishing I could clone myself just so I could give myself a proper thrashing.
This reminds me of a book I started writing during the beginning of COVID and got about two chapters into before I abandoned it. It was called Second in Command, and it was about a guy who, at the lowest point in his life, joined a medical study and ended up getting cloned. A few years later, when the study was over, the clone was remanded to his custody, but he decided the clone deserved a life of his own. They became roommates, called each other “First” and “Second”, and went about their respectively kinky lives. What was going to happen was that First’s girlfriend was going to do stuff with Second (with First’s knowledge; not cheating), and then they would form a poly V, and eventually they would form a triad where Second dominated both First and the girlfriend. It would have ended with a threesome, I think.
I went back and read the two chapters of Second in Command while writing this blog post, and I think there are some bones of a good story there. I wonder if it would cause issues if I tried to sell it on Amazon, though; is it incest if you fuck your own clone? Or is it just a really complex form of masturbation? I think I’d probably be safe about it and post it on Smashwords instead, since they’re more okay with consensual-but-edgy erotica.
Would you read this book, if I finished it?
