I recently had to travel for work, and I decided sitting in my hotel room after dinner was the perfect time to do the six words for the Lizzie book.

• THAT: from 768 down to 582
• WHICH: from 110 down to 100
• VERY (includes “every”): from 142 down to 131
• REALLY: from 112 down to 93
• ONLY: from 79 down to 70
• JUST (includes “adjust”): from 253 down to 180

“That” was by far the hardest one to deal with — I did the math, and apparently there was one “that” every 86 words, on average. That’s a lot. But I started writing these stories in the days before I learned to stop using “that” so much in my fiction. It’s not so bad now, I think.

Although, honestly, it doesn’t matter how many times I use “that” in the first three drafts. It’s the fourth draft where it matters.

Now I have a completed fourth draft. Now it’s time to start typesetting. I also have to decide on a title; I have a short list, but I don’t adore any of the titles enough to pick one out and say “this is the one!” I’ll go through them a few more times, and when I pick one, I’ll let you know.

In the meantime, here’s the content warning list for the book:

• Anal Play (F/M, M/F)
• Analingus (M/F)
• Ballbusting (F/M)
• Cunnilingus (M/F)
• Face-sitting (F/M)
• Fellatio (F/M)
• Foursomes (M/F/M/F)
• Polyamory (M/F/F)
• Pegging (F/M)
• PIV Intercourse (M/F)
• Smothering (F/M)
• Spanking (F/M, M/F)
• Threesomes (M/F/F)

I mean, it’s primarily a book about ballbusting and face-sitting, but there’s lots of other fun things in it as well. At least, I think they’re fun things.